Thanks to Grant at trekbbs.com for the original audio clip and YT channel deLimited Productions for making me aware of it. I have re-edited the shuttlecraft scene so the musical score by Horner fits better with the dialog and trimmed a bit of the re-used scenes from Motion Picture.
I had difficulty lining up the score by simply replacing the dialog with the cut away shot--the dialog was longer than the shot. Using some loops over existing parts of the soundtrack and lowering the crescendo cue, it flows a bit better.
The cut back to the Enterprise during Sulu's lines have been replaced with movie stills that pause and continue at the right moment. It isn't perfect, but a possible idea of how the scene might have played out.

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