In this video, we give you the top errors and mistakes we see college seniors make when they are working on their college admissions essays, and some tips and things to keep in mind as you draft. John and Shannon both graduated from Yale University, and for over 10 years have been helping college seniors craft the perfect essay as they try to get into their top schools. We talk about topics, common issues, and what makes a great essay.

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Common App Basic Package: $150 for one review and substantive comments on all common appessays.

Supplements: $50/ review of college specific essays or “hardship” essays.

Common App Plus package: $250, for two reviews of common app. Includes basic package above, plus another thorough review of your revised draft for polishing, spelling, flow.

Interview Prep: $50/half hour. When the time comes, we also prep young people by Skype and FaceTime in practice interviews to give you real time feedback on your interview style and a chance to practice with real interviewers.

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