In this episode, I wrote a model for another advantage/disadvantage essay from IELTS Academic 17, focusing on the topic of risk-taking. Stay tuned for more essays and analyses to enhance your IELTS writing skills.

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⌚ TIMESTAMPS
0:00 Understand the statement and instruction
0:37 Decide
1:41 Paraphrase the statement
2:06 Introduction
2:33 Body paragraph 1
3:33 Body paragraph 2
4:11 Body paragraph 3
5:02 Conclusion
5:56 Organization
6:26 Cohesion and coherence
6:33 Collocations and useful phrases

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