In this episode, I wrote a model for another advantage/disadvantage essay from IELTS Academic 15, focusing on the topic of hardwork. Stay tuned for more essays and analyses to enhance your IELTS writing skills.

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⌚ TIMESTAMPS
0:00 Understand the statement and instruction
0:33 Decide
1:24 Paraphrase the statement
1:34 Introduction
2:03 Body paragraph 1
2:43 Body paragraph 2
3:22 Body paragraph 3
3:58 Conclusion
4:34 Organization
4:55 Cohesion
5:02 Collocations and useful phrases

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