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TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - intro
1:00 - scene vs summary
2:17 - building blocks of a scene
4:40 - what is a scene?
7:25 - scene choreography
tips
9:20 - express, don't explain
9:58 - be mindful of change
10:44 - tension, stakes, conflict
11:16 - keep escalating the tension
11:55 - get in late, get out early
12:52 - don't repeat the purpose of a scene
13:59 - learn with each scene
14:31 - balance expression and information
15:25 - use surprising details
16:40 - don't lose the physicality

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MY SHORT STORIES:
☾Tabula Rasa - The Temz Review: [ Ссылка ]
☾How to Slaughter - The Common: [ Ссылка ]
☾After Hours - Vagabond City Lit: [ Ссылка ]
☾Daughter of a King - Vagabond City Lit: [ Ссылка ]
☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: [ Ссылка ]
☾Zugzwang - Plenitude: [ Ссылка ]
☾Elise Holding a Deer Mouse, 1829 - CAROUSEL: [ Ссылка ]
☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: [ Ссылка ]
☾Solarium - Minola Review: [ Ссылка ]
☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: [ Ссылка ]
☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: [ Ссылка ]
☾Wishbone - video reading: [ Ссылка ]
☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: [ Ссылка ]
☾Beautiful Animal - Room: [ Ссылка ]
☾How You'll Feel After the War - PRISM international: [ Ссылка ]

FAQS
→How old are you? - 26
→How long have you been writing? - Since I was 8
→Where do you live? - I keep that private for safety reasons, but I grew up in Vancouver.
→Where did you go to university and what did you study? - I keep my university information private, but I majored in writing with a concentration in fiction.
→What are your pronouns? - They/them or she/her
→Where can I read your books? - None of my books are published yet, but you can read my published short fiction in my linktree (linked above!)
→So when will your book be published? - I don’t know! I’m in the revision process right now, but I can’t predict exactly when I’ll have a book published. But I’m working on it!
→Do you plan to traditionally publish or self publish? - Traditionally publish
→Will you read my book/story/chapter/mentor me? - Unfortunately I cannot accommodate these requests because editing/critiquing is a labour intensive task that I can’t afford to do for free alongside my job, my own writing, and running this platform. If you would like to hire me for paid editing work, contact me privately on twitter or instagram.

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