Today I talk about some common college application essay mistakes that I have seen when reviewing college application essays - DO NOT MAKE THESE MISTAKES!
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Video Contents:
00:00 - Introduction
1:25 - Typos, Spelling, Grammar Errors
3:58 - Answer the Essay Prompt
5:07 - Picking a Bad Essay Topic
7:02 - Repeating Parts of Essays
8:15 - Thesaurus
9:29 - Threatening, Condescending Writing
10:42 - Not Writing about Yourself
12:23 - Starting the Night Before
13:31 - Final Remarks
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If you are new here, hi! My name is Rachel and I am a UC Berkeley graduate (Class of 2020) where I double majored in cognitive science and legal studies.
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