Today, I'm helping a new writer edit the first chapter of his fantasy novel.
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⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction
01:05 - Ethan's goals for the call
01:49 - Correct manuscript formatting
02:57 - The opening sentence
03:23 - Character backstory
03:41 - Ground us within the setting
04:56 - How can substances impact the magic
05:37 - Scene transitions
06:36 - Dialogue formatting
07:41 - Paragraph spacing
11:40 - Action beats with dialogue
12:33 - Speaking names in dialogue
13:24 - Understanding punctuation
16:04 - Fix foreshadowing later in the edit
16:48 - How to describe coughing
19:24 - The importance of intention
20:06 - The Emotion Thesaurus
23:02 - Back to expressing coughing in dialogue
24:21 - Lean into the apprentice trope
25:59 - Formatting interjections
26:32 - An industrialising fantasy world
29:55 - Writing accents
31:29 - Creating a culture inspired by leafcutter ants
32:52 - An easy worldbuilding win
34:09 - Be cautious about this
34:47 - Learning from The Name of the Wind
36:03 - Writing songs
36:38 - Where the chapter becomes interesting
38:22 - Shortening the chapter
40:11 - Conveying the magic system
43:13 - Dealing with a tone change
47:12 - Picking the right character for exposition
48:16 - Establishing promises
48:41 - Series or standalone?
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